white clouds bleach the skyearthen path leads over hill
glorious vision
2
white clouds bleach the sky
beaten path runs through the grass
cat in sunny spot
3
white clouds bleach the sky
beaten path runs through the grass
sleepy cat purring
Okay, I'm satisfied with the third and final version of this haiku ... lol ... I'll stop tweaking it now. To read other haikus, visit One Deep Breath.
1 comment:
I loved that first line because that's just what it looks like...very cool!
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